RE: Fiction: Epiphany (Epifanía) [EN/ES]
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving such a great comment, I feel honored to receive such an in-depth analysis of my story.
It really wasn't a dream, I took it as a vision. Luis found relief from his pain in the apparition. In the end I emphasize that it was not a dream when the children heard their mother's voice.
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This is a good point. The visit then is a real spiritual vision, and this is a better resolution to the story. 👍