RE: Overcoming Jennifer | 26 April 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2354 | Prompt: lack of concentration (falta de concentración)

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What a delightful tale!
You bring us so deep into the mind of this little boy that we see his thoughts, his fears and the things he can't say out loud. I do hope it isn't any more than bad vision.🥰



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Hello @jhymi. Thanks so much for taking time to visit and view my story. Yes, budding romance interests of elementary school boys can be so delightful. At least, he's observant in finding out what his love interest, Jennifer, likes. And boys wearing eyeglasses, don't even approach her.

I feel my story tells of the world youngsters see as it relates to themselves. It's an innocence to be preserved, for too soon the outward world will descend upon them. I too hope the tests don't reveal any devastating medical condition causing his temporary blindness.

I appreciate your kind compliment for my story. Thanks for your support. Take care.

!LADY

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You have a wonderful day yourself. That's a fine young man you created.🥰

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