12 April 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt (Day 2704) | Prompt: walk this way please (por aquí, por favor)
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Individuals usually obey commands when those orders are in line with reasonable demands from authority. Once sense of any impropriety or situations that give one pause to question those orders may result in a reluctance to adhere to authority or outright rebellion. The prompt "walk this way please" reminds me of this scenario. I share with you a ZAPFIC50 story that is told in exactly 50 words. The challenge was created by @felt.buzz.
I based my 50-word story on @mariannewest's Freewrite prompt: 12 april 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2704: walk this way, please. If you'd like to join in from the daily prompts, visit @daily.prompt's Profile and view each day's freewrite prompt.
Below is my story.
Conner exited the taxi, rushing into the terminal. Distracted, he downplayed alterations.
'Walk this way, please' the sign flashed behind men lined against opposite walls. If their matching lime-green suits weren't telling, shades and watches confirmed.
Spotting Executioner, Trixter Shadowmond, Conner turned and fled.
"Runner. Exit-19," guards yelled.
Prison avoided.
! [The Terminal Back To Captivity]
Los individuos suelen obedecer órdenes cuando éstas se ajustan a las exigencias razonables de la autoridad. Cuando se percibe alguna incorrección o se dan situaciones que llevan a cuestionar esas órdenes, la persona puede mostrarse reacia a acatar la autoridad o rebelarse abiertamente. La frase "por aquí, por favor » me recuerda a esta situación. Comparto con vosotros una historia de ZAPFIC50 contada exactamente con 50 palabras. El reto fue creado por @felt.buzz.
Basé mi historia de 50 palabras en la sugerencia de escritura libre de @mariannewest: 12 abril 2025, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2704: walk this way, please. Si quieres participar en las sugerencias diarias, visita el perfil de @daily.prompt y consulta la sugerencia de escritura libre de cada día.
A continuación mi historia.
Source...La terminal de vuelta al cautiverio
Conner salió del taxi y se apresuró a entrar en la terminal. Distraído, restó importancia a las alteraciones.
Camine por aquí, por favor», decía el cartel detrás de los hombres alineados contra las paredes opuestas. Si sus trajes verde lima a juego no lo decían todo, las gafas de sol y los relojes lo confirmaban.
Al ver al Verdugo, Trixter Shadowmond, Conner se dio la vuelta y huyó.
«Corredor. Salida-19», gritaron los guardias.
Prisión evitada.
The screenshot at WORDCOUNTER.net evidences my use of exactly 50 words to create my ZapFic50.
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If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding.
El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.
!BEER
Nice write up
Hello @sommylove. Thanks so much for stopping by. I appreciate it and your lovely comment for my story. I often take the daily prompt and convert it to a ZAPFIC50 or ZAPFIC250 story. Take care and have a good rest of your week.
!LADY
You are highly welcomed
Thanks 🙏
The twist at the end is brilliant. The phrase 'Walk this way, please' takes on a sinister tone with the reveal of Executioner Trixter Shadowmond. Well-crafted and engaging, it leaves me wanting more. Great job capturing a thrilling scene in just 50 words!"
Corner fled for his life 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Yep, just 50 words I attempted to capture the scene. I'm pleased you liked how it ended. It seemed as though he were just going on a trip with his luggage. He's a shift one trying to escape from the authorities.
I appreciate you stopping by and viewing my story. Thanks for your engagement and support. Take care.
!LADY