S&S Invitational: november. Herencia fatal (cuento) Fatal inheritance (Story)

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Herencia fatal

Teófilo Barrera, Tenía ya varios días con un malestar en las tripas, él prefería no decir nada, simplemente aguantaba como buen macho.
Su hija mayor le dijo que tenía que ir al hospital, ella sabía que esos malestares eran algo más serio, esas muecas escondidas le decían otra cosa.
Su falta de apetito y sobre todo eso de quedarse en casa sin ánimos de salir le empezaron a preocupar.

—¡Mamá, tu bien sabes que él no es hombre de quejarse?
—¿Y qué esperas? No voy a ir a ningún hospital y tener que verles la cara a sus otras mujeres... ¡Ve tú! Eres su hija mayor.
Estela llamó a su jefe en el comando policial y le explicó la situación de su padre.
—El oficial Barrera ha sido un policía con mucho carácter, se merece mi respeto, ya le envío una patrulla para que lo lleve lo más rápido posible.
La doctora la atendió muy diligente.
—Su tensión arterial está un poco alta, — le dijo, —vamos a inyectarle un hipertensivo y hay que realizar otros exámenes.
Teófilo se sentía incómodo, más cuando fueron desfilando cada uno de sus hijos, el veía sus miradas cruzándose y guardando las distancias. Notó las fobias encontradas y como las palabras se iban encendiendo, el ambiente estaba tenso.

—Eso te pasa por tener varias mujeres, —le dijo su hija, —nunca respetaste a mamá. Por eso no quiso venir.
Pero Teófilo había cumplido con sus obligaciones de hombre y como padre de familia. Se sentía orgulloso de verlos crecer.
—Ninguno se murió de hambre, hija, le di los estudios a todos, no les faltó nada.
Esa vida no se la perdonaron las hijas, sobre todo Estela, que había nacido con poder de mando y de carácter amargo, capaz de enfrentarlo, por eso siguió sus pasos como agente policial.
Cuando la doctora recibió el resultado de los exámenes, arqueó un poco las cejas y llamó a Estela para hablar en privado.
—¡Dígame lo que pasa doctora!
Los demás hijos apuntaron sus miradas y siguieron a la doctora.

—¿Algo anda mal, doctora? —le preguntó uno de los mayores, qué era hijo de otra mujer.
La doctora miró la actitud de ambos y sintió las malas vibras.
— Haremos otros exámenes para ver las cosas con más claridad. Todavía no puedo dar un diagnóstico con exactitud, hay algo que no me gusta mucho, es todo lo que puedo decir.
Teófilo, lo escuchaba todo, sin embargo, lo que dijera la doctora no era su preocupación, pensaba en aquella reunión inesperada entre sus hijos, nunca se imaginó que las cosas iban a reventar con enfrentamientos familiares. Algo que no pudo lograr, a pesar de su carácter, fue reunir a sus hijos se quisieran como hermanos, él, culpaba a las mujeres, por no saber entenderse.
Su vida como policía, le facilitó tener varias amantes, pero no le importó dejar hijos sin la presencia de un padre.

—¡Doctora quiero ir al baño! ¡Necesito defecar!
—Vaya con uno de sus hijos, — le dijo a uno de ellos que lo llevara con mucho cuidado.

Estela trataba de mantener una cara de tranquilidad, pero sus manos la traicionaban, presentía que algo iba a pasar, su mamá tuvo razón de no venir.
Teófilo sintió que le faltaba el aire cuando vio llegar a Raquel, la última del rebaño, hija de su última amante, tenía un carácter muy parecido al de Estela, respiró con fuerza tratando de aguantar aquella situación.

—¿Qué pasa con mi papá? — le pregunto a Estela.
—Se está muriendo, — le contestó, —su salud se ha complicado.
—¿Cómo que se está muriendo?
—Tu bien sabes lo terco que es papá, nunca le gustaba ir a los médicos.
Ambas vieron cuando su padre entró al baño, luego se desafiaron con la mirada.

—Venir aquí solo fue un pretexto hijo, ¡usted es hombre y me entiende!
—¿Qué tengo que entender, papá?
Su padre lo miró buscando cierta complicidad, hacerlo entender que así se comportan los hombres.
—No puedo estar de acuerdo con su vida papá, uno puede andar con otras mujeres, pero eso de dejar hijos por todos lados, no me parece y que sus mujeres se agarren a pelear en las calles, se revuelquen como perras, tampoco estoy de acuerdo.
Teófilo lo miro con reproche, quiso decirle algo, tener la fuerza necesaria para hacerse respetar, pero le vino ese dolor, le subía por el estómago, ahogándolo, apretó los puños y se puso lívido.
—¿Qué te pasa papá?
Pero no alcanzo a decir las palabras para darle una respuesta, apenas escuchó el grito de su hijo llamando a la doctora, luego el estrépito de médicos y enfermeras llevándolo a una camilla para tratar de recobrarlo.
—¡Salgan por favor! —gritaba una enfermera.
Estela corrió hacia su hermano, lo empujó con fuerza.
—¿Qué le dijiste? ¡Seguro lo alteraste!
Raquel se paró frente a Estela y la empujó también.
—¡Vas a echarnos la culpa, tú vives con él y con la bruja de tu mamá!
Teófilo no se enteró de los gritos, los insultos y los golpes que llovieron y alteraron la calma del hospital cuando comenzaron a repartirse las culpas, salieron a relucir los celos y las rivalidades.
—¡Por favor llamen a seguridad! —dijo la doctora, —¡que los saquen a todos!
Teófilo sintió la descarga golpearlo en su pecho, pero en su mente solo estaban Estela y Raquel, sus dos hijas enfrentadas en una pelea que el causó, pero ya no lo podía remediar. Pensó en esa herencia que dejaba.
—Ya no hay nada que hacer, —dijo la doctora, —su corazón se detuvo.

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Fatal inheritance

Teófilo Barrera had been feeling sick to his stomach for several days, he preferred not to say anything, he simply put up with it like a good macho man.
His eldest daughter told him that he had to go to the hospital, she knew that these discomforts were something more serious, but those hidden grimaces told her otherwise.
His lack of appetite and above all that of staying at home with no desire to go out began to worry him.

—Mum, you know he's not a man to complain, don't you?
—And what are you waiting for? I'm not going to go to any hospital and have to see the faces of his other women... You go! You're his eldest daughter.
Estela called her boss at the police command and explained her father's situation.
—Officer Barrera has been a policeman with a lot of character, he deserves my respect, I'm sending a patrol car to take him away as quickly as possible.
The doctor attended to her very diligently.
—His blood pressure is a little high, — she said, —we are going to inject him with a hypertensive, and other tests need to be done.
Teófilo felt uncomfortable, even more so when each of his children was paraded around, he saw their gazes crossing and keeping their distance. He noticed the conflicting phobias and how the words were flaring up, the atmosphere was tense.

—That's what you get for having several women, — his daughter told him, —you never respected mother. That's why he didn't want to come.
But Teófilo had fulfilled his obligations as a man and as a father of a family. He was proud to see them grow up.
—None of them died of hunger, daughter, I gave them all an education, they lacked nothing.
His daughters did not forgive him for that life, especially Estela, who had been born with the power of command and a bitter character, capable of confronting him, which is why she followed in his footsteps as a police officer.
When the doctor received the results of the tests, she arched her eyebrows slightly and called Estela to speak privately.
—Tell me what's wrong, doctor!
The other sons pointed their gazes and followed the doctor.

—Is something wrong, doctor? —asked one of the older ones, who was the son of another woman.
The doctor looked at the attitude of both of them and sensed the bad vibes.
— We will do further tests to see things more clearly. I can't give an exact diagnosis yet, there's something I don't like very much, that's all I can say.
Teófilo listened to everything, however, whatever the doctor said was not his concern, he was thinking about that unexpected meeting between his children, he never imagined that things were going to explode with family confrontations. Something he could not achieve, despite his character, was to bring his sons together to love each other like brothers, he blamed the women for not knowing how to understand each other.
His life as a policeman made it easy for him to have several mistresses, but he didn't mind leaving children without a father.

—Doctor, I want to go to the toilet! I need to defecate!
—Go with one of her sons, —she told one of them to take him very carefully.
Estela tried to keep a calm face, but her hands betrayed her, she had a feeling that something was going to happen, and her mother was right not to come.
Teófilo felt short of breath when he saw Raquel arrive, the last of the flock, the daughter of his last lover, she had a character very similar to Estela's, and he breathed hard trying to endure the situation.

—What about my father? — she asked Estela.
—He's dying, — she answered, —his health has deteriorated.
—What do you mean, he's dying?
—You know how stubborn Dad is, he never liked going to the doctor.
They both watched as their father went into the bathroom, and then challenged each other with their eyes.

—Coming here was just a pretext son, you're a man and you understand me!
—What am I supposed to understand, Dad?
His father looked at him looking for a certain complicity, to make him understand that this is how men behave.
—I can't agree with your life, Dad, you can go around with other women, but leaving sons all over the place doesn't seem right to me, and I don't agree that your wives get into fights in the streets, that they wallow around like bitches, either.
Teófilo looked at him reproachfully, he wanted to say something to him, to have the strength to make himself respected, but that pain came to him, it went up through his stomach, choking him, he clenched his fists and became livid.
—What's wrong, Dad?
But he couldn't manage to say the words to give him an answer, he barely heard his son's shout calling for the doctor, then the clatter of doctors and nurses carrying him to a stretcher to try to get him back.
—Please come out! —a nurse shouted.
Estela ran to her brother, pushing him hard.
—What did you say to him? You must have upset him!
Raquel stood in front of Estela and pushed her too.
—You're going to blame us, you live with him and the witch of your mother!
Teófilo was oblivious to the shouting, insults, and blows that rained down and disturbed the calm of the hospital as blame began to be apportioned, jealousy and rivalries surfaced.
—Please call security! —said the doctor, —get them all out!
Teófilo felt the shock hit him in his chest, but in his mind, there were only Estela and Raquel, his two daughters at loggerheads in a fight that he had caused, but he could no longer help it. He thought of the inheritance he was leaving behind.
—There is nothing to be done now, —said the doctor, —his heart stopped.

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Que publicación más chula!
Me ha encantado la visita y comentario que dejaste en mi blog @silher.
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Gracias por pasar, la verdad es que recordé lo del club de los doce en steemit,como pasa el tiempo, parece que fuera algo tan lejano, bueno aquí estoy con #hive, escribiendo poesía y cuentos. Un fuerte abrazo desde Venezuela.

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What a gripping and relatable story! It took the father's deteriorating health for him to realise the consequences of his multiple relationships and children. You capture the conflicts, emotions and tensions between the children very well. Too bad Teófilo died without repairing the relationship between the children.

Well done! Thank you for participating in the Scholar N Scribe November Invitational. Keep writing! !PIZZA

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