RE: Uprising In Gonjolard | Freewrite: 3/22/24 | Prompt: A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words

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Intriguing and suspenseful! A resistance movement is steadily building, and Vicar Tibost and Alphonse are at the heart of it. Their ruler, the Crown, is cruel and oppressive. The citizens are suffering and these two are determined to carve a way out of the mess!

You build the tension so well from the beginning, making me wonder where the peasant aka Alphonse is heading to. And Vicar Tibost, though scruffy-looking, is smart and strategic. You have me on the edge of my seat hoping the soldiers don't find these characters and they can successfully free their people from the oppression.

I enjoy stories set in historical or medieval times. Beautifully written! Looking forward to the continuing part. !PIMP 💕



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Yes, a resistance movement is slowly underway in the town. However, asking people to join in and risk their lives, even for freedom from their own bondage, is a tricky avenue to navigate without assurance of success.

As always, it starts with an idea of change. Then someone willing to risk all to see the change takes place. I applaud Alphonse and Vicar Tibost for their courage to at least try. But is it enough to carry out the plan of resistance? I hope so.

Thanks so much for your visit and lovely compliment for my story. I'm pleased your found it suspenseful and interesting. I appreciate your thorough analysis of the plot.

Again, I appreciate your support of my writings. Take care and have a good rest of your week.

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