RE: The Agent and His Kids (Monthly Short Fiction Contest)
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Wow. A gripping tale of courage and sacrifice! Your story is filled with action, suspense and I enjoyed the heartwarming moments.
Robert is an admirable character and his dedication to protecting the kids led to the strong emotional connection between them. You build the tension well. Beautifully written!
Thank you for participating in the Scholar N Scribe November Invitational. !PIZZA 🙂
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Thank you! I had a lot of fun with this!