The Final Balancing Act | ZAPFIC MONDAY (4/15/24) | Prompt: consciousness (conciencia)

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The prompt "consciousness" for this week's consideration for the ZAPFIC Monday challenge presented the opportunity to explore a person's state of mind and awareness of his or her surroundings and the details of a situation when awake. I share here my flash fiction in the format of a 240-word story, whose format was created by @felt.buzz.

My story is below:

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Without hesitation, Ned broke through the tape. No one would deny him access.

Grabbing his arm and pulling him close, his wife Carly whispered before losing consciousness, "Adam loosened the rope".

He rose and searched for her bitter partner.

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El tema "conciencia" de esta semana para el desafío de los lunes de ZAPFIC ofrecía la oportunidad de explorar el estado mental de una persona y su conciencia de lo que le rodea y de los detalles de una situación cuando está despierta. Comparto aquí mi flash fiction en formato de relato de 240 palabras, cuyo formato fue creado por @felt.buzz.

Mi historia está abajo:

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El último acto de equilibrio

Sin dudarlo, Ned atravesó la cinta. Nadie le negaría el acceso.

Agarrándole del brazo y tirando de él para acercarlo, su esposa Carly susurró antes de perder el conocimiento: "Adam aflojó la cuerda".

Se levantó y buscó a su amargado compañero.

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I leave here the screenshot evidencing the 240-character limit for my story for ZAPFIC Monday (4/15/24):

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If you'd like to participate, here's the official post:
Si quieres participar, aquí tienes el post oficial:

It's ZapFicMonday! Write me a story in 240 characters or less!

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RULES:
  • Post to the Freewriters Community.

  • Use #freewritehouse and #zapfic tags.

  • Please use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. This makes it easier for you and @feltbuzz!

  • Use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination)

  • You have 3 days (until Thursday 23h59 GMT) to post a Zapfic (a story written in 240 characters or less) using the prompt given.

  • Try to tell a complete story if you can!

  • The story should only be 240 characters long (including spaces)

NORMAS:
  • Postear en la comunidad de Freewriters.

  • Usa las etiquetas #freewritehouse y #zapfic.

  • Por favor, utiliza un contador de palabras/caracteres (¡si buscas contador de palabras en internet o en la tienda de aplicaciones de tu teléfono tendrás una gran selección!) wordcounter.net e incluye una captura de pantalla. Así será más fácil para ti y para @feltbuzz.

  • Utiliza el texto como mejor te parezca (usa tu imaginación).

  • Dispones de 3 días (hasta el jueves a las 23h59 GMT) para publicar un Zapfic (una historia escrita en 240 caracteres o menos) utilizando el tema propuesto.

  • Intenta contar una historia completa si puedes.

  • La historia debe tener sólo 240 caracteres (espacios incluidos).

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Good luck everyone with whatever your endeavors.

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SOURCES:
a) JustClickindiva's Footer created in Canva utilizing its free background and images used with permission from discord admins.
b) Unless otherwise noted, all photos taken by me with my (i) Samsung Galaxy 10" Tablet, (ii) Samsung Phone, & (iii) FUJI FinePix S3380 - 14 Mega Pixels Digital Camera
c) Purple Butterfly part of purchased set of Spiritual Clip Art for my Personal Use
d) All Community logos, banners, page dividers used with permission of Discord Channel admins.
e) Ladies of Hive banner used with permission of and in accordance with the admin's guidelines
f) Thumbnail Image created by me in Canva.
g) "Flames." What is Apophysis 2.09. https://flam3.com/

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English is my native language.
If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding
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El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.

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You have shared always very great and amazing stories.

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Thanks so much @djbravo for your kind words. I appreciate it and the fact that you liked my story. Your support is much appreciated. Take care.

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