The Ball Is In My Court Now | ZAPFIC50 MONDAY (3/4/24) | Prompt: agency

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It's time for the ZAPFIC50 Monday. This challenge by @felt-buzz provides members with the opportunity to present a flash fiction story in exactly 50 words. In this week's prompt, "agency", I explore another meaning of the word that means the ability to take appropriate action when prompted by a significant event.

My story is below:

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Shocked, Elizabeth stiffened. Immediately her attorney reached over, steadying her hand.

Wait! it signaled.

Jeremy had agreed to keep the proceeding civil. Now, he was protesting her claim for custody.

His betrayal prompted her sense of agency. Elizabeth nodded.

Her attorney complied, introducing documentation of Jeremy's obscene, dark web activities.

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Ha llegado la hora del lunes ZAPFIC50. Este reto de @felt-buzz ofrece a sus miembros la oportunidad de presentar un relato de ficción en 50 palabras exactas. En el reto de esta semana, "agencia", exploro otro significado de la palabra que significa la capacidad de tomar las medidas apropiadas cuando un acontecimiento importante nos empuja a ello.

A continuación mi historia.

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La pelota está ahora en mi tejado

Sorprendida, Elizabeth se puso rígida. Inmediatamente, su abogado se acercó a ella y le sujetó la mano.

Espera!, le indicó.

Jeremy había accedido a mantener el procedimiento civil. Ahora protestaba contra su petición de custodia.

Su traición provocó su sentido de agencia. Elizabeth asintió.

Su abogado cumplió y presentó documentación sobre las obscenas actividades de Jeremy en la red.

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I leave here the screenshot evidencing the 50-word limit for my story for ZAPFIC50 Monday for 3/4/24 for prompt: "agency":

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If you'd like to participate, here's the official post:
Si quieres participar, aquí tienes el post oficial:

It's the first Monday in March! It's time for #ZapFic50Monday! Write me a story in precisely 50 words!

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RULES:
  • Post to the Freewriters Community.

  • Use #freewritehouse, zapfic50monday, and #zapfic tags.

  • Place a link to your post in the comments to the official ZAPFIC50 Monday post.

  • Please use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. This makes it easier for you and @feltbuzz!

  • Use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination)

  • You have 3 days (until Thursday 23h59 GMT) to post a Zapfic50 Monday (a story written in exactly 50 words) using the prompt given.

  • Try to tell a complete story if you can!

  • The story should only exactly 50 words (including spaces)

NORMAS:
  • Postea en la comunidad de Freewriters.

  • Utiliza las etiquetas #freewritehouse, zapfic50monday y #zapfic.

  • Pon un enlace a tu post en los comentarios del post oficial del Lunes de ZAPFIC50.

  • Utiliza un contador de palabras/caracteres (si buscas contador de palabras en Internet o en la tienda de aplicaciones de tu teléfono tendrás una gran selección) wordcounter.net e incluye una captura de pantalla. Así será más fácil para ti y para @feltbuzz.

  • Utiliza el texto como mejor te parezca (usa tu imaginación).

  • Tienes 3 días (hasta el jueves a las 23h59 GMT) para publicar un Zapfic50 Monday (una historia escrita en exactamente 50 palabras) utilizando el tema propuesto.

  • Intenta contar una historia completa si puedes.

  • La historia debe tener exactamente 50 palabras (espacios incluidos).

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Good luck everyone with whatever your endeavors.

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d) All Community logos, banners, page dividers used with permission of Discord Channel admins.
e) Ladies of Hive banner used with permission of and in accordance with the admin's guidelines
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English is my native language.
If translation included, I use DeepL to assist my readers.
Thanks for your patience an understanding
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El inglés es mi lengua materna.
Si se incluye traducción, utilizo DeepL para ayudar a mis lectores.
Gracias por su paciencia y comprensión.

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Tsk, tsk, Jeremy! This is a betrayal indeed. With this new evidence, he's certainly going to lose the battle for custody. On the other hand, I want to assume that the dark web activities was not intentionally withheld from Jeremy's attorney during discovery but found later to enable it's admissibility. 😄 The troubles of divorce proceedings!

Good call on Elizabeth's part. She did what she must to protect her children. An interesting zapfic! Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful day. !PIMP 💕

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Hello @kemmyb. Not intentionally withheld. After already agreeing to step away from the marriage amicably, hubris wouldn't allow him to believe she knew nothing of his secret life she suspected, then found out later. Challenging her was the wrong move. He gambled and lost.

Yes, indeed. The troubles of divorce. Never a win-win situation when children are involved. She probably didn't want his secrets to come out to shield them.

Thanks so much for your visit and engagement with my story. I appreciate it.

Take care and have a good rest of your week.
!ALIVE

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That was meant to be the last card if every other thing failed. A beautiful story.

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Yes, it was her "Ace" if need be. Sometimes calling someone's bluff if you're not absolutely certain of the outcome can be devastating.

I'm pleased you liked my story. I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to view it. Take care.

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Always important to have a plan B.
Short story, yet with an important lesson

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So true, @graat. And the wife's Plan B was a shocker. If only he would have gone away nicely as areed. If only...

Thanks so much for your visit and engagement. I appreciate it and your support. Take care.

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He can't have custody with those dark secrets of his'. He didn't play fair so he would face Elizabeth's full wrath.
A beautiful one there.

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It will serve him right @edith-4angelseu since he didn't go away peacefully as he initially agreed. Calling another person's bluff sometimes backfires, as it did in his case. Some things a person may want to tuck in his back pocket and ease away gently into that dark night!

Thanks so much for your visit and lovely compliment for my short piece. I appreciate it and your support. Take care.

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His betrayal has been revealed, I am sure starting from that day, he will become honest in whatever he go Into.

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Yes sir re bob! He was dishonest in all his dealings, it seems. He will get payback, one way or the other. Anytime a person breaks a trust, nothing good will come of it. Thanks so much for stopping by and taking time to view my flash fiction story. I appreciate it.

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It's good his end caught up with him

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