Calamity In A Distant Time and Place | 4 February 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2272 | Prompt: neverending hallway (pasillo interminable)

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Officer Shanahan didn't like patrolling his assigned area. The only positive aspect sat at end of the block. The sweet shop. He smiled as the pleasant looking, accommodating worker's face who catered to his and his partner's needs...and occasionally, their desires, flashed across his thought. With that, he remembered his younger partner, Officer Granthom. He glanced around, cursing under his breath. How long does it take to fetch a cup of brew? But he understood.

As he strolled down the sidewalk in front of the back alley, the bleak morning revealed itself. Heavy mist descended and hovered, saturating the nearby bushes and the sleeve of his uniform.

He glanced up while wiping away the moisture. Shuddering, he adjusted his coat and hat. To ease the tingling, he blew into his hands, rubbing them together, then dove deep into his pocket and retrieved his gloves.

The streetlight flickered as the mist obscured its large bulb, preventing it from performing its assigned duty. He almost stumbled over the heavy clump of trash. Looking down, he cursed. Adjusting his glasses, he peered at the trash that came into focus.

The shape resembled a human body. Furious, he yelled, mostly from having to stop and deal with a vagabond this early in his shift.

"Get yourself up. The bloody hell! what's going on here? Low-life vagrants littering the area," Officer Shanahan murmured, before moving in for a closer look. He removed his hat, then scratched his head.

He continued, thinking the man would wake at his shrill, condescending tone. "No decent person would be caught dead on this block this chilly morning." Ensuring his gloves were fitted, he reached down and shook the man's shoulder twice before kicking him in the left shin.

That's when he caught a glimpse of a woman's foot with laced boots curled next to the man. The man's right hand lay slightly behind him holding cloth from the hem of the woman's dress.

Wondering what was amiss, he traced the length of the dress to the woman's head.

Immediately, he knelt, noticing a thick, red substance mixed with gently falling rain, flowing from the woman's face onto the sidewalk. A struggle had occurred here, he surmised. Perhaps the woman attempted to flee from this criminal's grasp. Or, perhaps he was her mentor, and Shanahan sneered at the thought, training her how best to advertise her availability and wares.

The latter scenario didn't fit with the man or woman's dress and facial features. Shanahan rose, then stumbled backward. Righting himself, he froze feeling rooted to the sidewalk. He'd seen numerous dead bodies, but this woman's contorted face and strange wounds revealed something sinister he couldn't describe.

"That woman is dead. Can you explain what happened?" Seething, Shanahan turned back toward the man, pointing in the woman's direction.

"I did not kill that woman!" With his eyes closed, the man shook his head furiously.

"What's your name? Where are you from? And how do you know this woman?

Malcolm's thoughts vascillated as his head bobbed back and forth. He opened his eyes, then stammered..."I'm Malcolm Hedwig. I travel alone. I don't know this woman or what happened to her. I don't remember meeting her."

"Don't remember. Then I'll give you the privilege of explaining to the magistrate why that woman is dead." Shanahan grabbed Malcolm's arm and lifted him upright.

"Magistrate! Why? I'm innocent, believe me!" Malcolm shook his head violently.

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Malcolm squinted as he peered into the fog. He'd just locked the door of his flat and headed toward his job, opting to walk for his morning exercise. Feeling a light mist, he reached down to open his umbrella.

Slowly the unfamiliar street sporting a vintage streetlight came into view. Taking a deep breath, he cupped his head in his hands before settling on the officer's face. The officer's uniform, head covering, and gloves didn't fit what he knew. He scoured the sidewalk for anything familiar, but nothing could be found; not even his red oversized umbrella.

Malcolm's thoughts vascillated as he head bobbed back and forth, repeating, "I did not kill that woman! "I'm alone. I don't know her or what happened.""

"Don't remember or don't want to remember? Then I'll give you the privilege of explaining that to the magistrate."

Shanahan's mouth twisted into a sneer as he watched with disgust the disheveled young man rouse from his sleep as though in a stupor. His matted hair, horrible breath, and bloodshot eyes spoke of a rowdy night of amusement. But as whose expense?

His eyes cut toward the female lying dead next to him.

With his hand visibly shaking, Shanahan grabbed his whistle and blew hard, alerting his partner. He forgot for a moment his partner was securing their morning breakfast at the local bakery.

Within minutes, Officer Granthom arrived.

"This is Malcolm Hedwig. He's just committed a brutal slaying of that young woman. And, he's pretending not to know her or where he is. Typical criminal, turned murderer. Call this in for the woman. Let's escort him to the precinct."

Handcuffed and confused, Malcolm walked slowly into the precinct. A police station they called this place, he thought. What type of justice will I receive in this backward hall?

He stumbled, but not before the two officers held him upright. The stark, white, shabby walls vanished, morphing so quickly his head spun. In its place, a bronze, neverending hallway materialized. Subtle, but forceful poundings on the inner walls, like deranged souls begging to be rescued from their bondage, thumped in Malcolm's ears.

Like a scene from his favorite novel, the hallway buckled inward. Instantly, the officers' hands released their grip on his arms. The handcuffs fell away from his wrists.

Malcolm vanished into the fading light at the end of the hallway. His last thoughts centered on whether he was about to slip into infinity, then turned to the whereabouts of his new umbrella and whether he would ever be able to return to his mundane accounting job.

[to be continued...]

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For my theme, I was inspired by and utilized the @daily.prompt's publishing of:

Neverending hallway:
4 February 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2272

Slip into infinity:
10 February 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2278

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! [Calamity in a Distant Time Translation]

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Calamidad en un tiempo y lugar lejanos

Al oficial Shanahan no le gustaba patrullar la zona que le habían asignado. El único aspecto positivo estaba al final de la manzana. La tienda de golosinas. Sonrió al ver la cara de la agradable y complaciente trabajadora que atendía sus necesidades y las de su compañero... y, de vez en cuando, sus deseos. Al hacerlo, recordó a su compañero más joven, el agente Granthom. Miró a su alrededor, maldiciendo en voz baja. ¿Cuánto tiempo se tarda en traer una taza de cerveza? Pero comprendió.

Mientras paseaba por la acera frente al callejón trasero, la mañana sombría se reveló. Una espesa niebla descendía y se cernía, saturando los arbustos cercanos y la manga de su uniforme.

Levantó la vista mientras se limpiaba la humedad. Temblando, se ajustó el abrigo y el sombrero. Para aliviar el hormigueo, se sopló en las manos, frotándoselas, y luego se metió los guantes en el bolsillo.

La farola parpadeó cuando la niebla ocultó su gran bombilla, impidiéndole cumplir su cometido. Estuvo a punto de tropezar con un montón de basura. Miró hacia abajo y maldijo. Se ajustó las gafas y se fijó en la basura.

La forma parecía la de un cuerpo humano. Furioso, gritó, sobre todo por tener que detenerse y tratar con un vagabundo tan temprano en su turno.

"Levántate. ¡Maldita sea! ¿Qué está pasando aquí? Vagabundos de poca monta ensuciando la zona", murmuró el agente Shanahan, antes de acercarse a mirar más de cerca. Se quitó el sombrero y se rascó la cabeza.

Continuó, pensando que el hombre se despertaría ante su tono chillón y condescendiente. "A ninguna persona decente la pillarían muerta en este bloque esta fría mañana". Asegurándose de que los guantes le quedaban bien, se agachó y sacudió dos veces el hombro del hombre antes de darle una patada en la espinilla izquierda.

Fue entonces cuando vislumbró un pie de mujer con botas de cordones enroscado junto al hombre. La mano derecha del hombre yacía ligeramente detrás de él sujetando una tela del dobladillo del vestido de la mujer.

Preguntándose qué ocurría, recorrió el vestido hasta la cabeza de la mujer.

Inmediatamente, se arrodilló, notando una sustancia espesa y roja, mezclada con la lluvia que caía suavemente, que fluía de la cara de la mujer a la acera. Supuso que se había producido un forcejeo. Tal vez la mujer intentó huir de las garras del criminal. O tal vez era su mentor, y Shanahan se burló de la idea, que la entrenaba para publicitar mejor su disponibilidad y su mercancía.

Esta última hipótesis no encajaba con la vestimenta y los rasgos faciales del hombre o la mujer. Shanahan se levantó y se tambaleó hacia atrás. Al enderezarse, se quedó clavado en la acera. Había visto numerosos cadáveres, pero el rostro contorsionado y las extrañas heridas de esta mujer revelaban algo siniestro que no podía describir.

"Esa mujer está muerta. ¿Puede explicar qué ha pasado?" Furioso, Shanahan se volvió hacia el hombre, señalando en dirección a la mujer.

"¡Yo no maté a esa mujer!" Con los ojos cerrados, el hombre sacudió la cabeza furiosamente.

"¿Cómo te llamas? ¿De dónde eres? ¿Y de qué conoces a esta mujer?

Los pensamientos de Malcolm oscilaban mientras su cabeza se balanceaba de un lado a otro. Abrió los ojos y balbuceó: "Soy Malcolm Hedwig. Viajo solo. No conozco a esta mujer ni sé qué le pasó. No recuerdo haberla conocido".

"No recuerdo. Entonces te concederé el privilegio de explicarle al magistrado por qué esa mujer está muerta". Shanahan agarró a Malcolm del brazo y lo levantó.

"¡Magistrado! ¿Por qué? Soy inocente, ¡créame!" Malcolm sacudió violentamente la cabeza.

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Malcolm entrecerró los ojos mientras miraba la niebla. Acababa de cerrar la puerta de su piso y se dirigía a su trabajo, optando por caminar como ejercicio matutino. Al sentir una ligera bruma, se agachó para abrir el paraguas.

Poco a poco, la desconocida calle con una antigua farola se hizo visible. Respiró hondo y se tomó la cabeza entre las manos antes de fijarse en el rostro del agente. El uniforme, el cubrecabezas y los guantes del agente no encajaban con lo que él conocía. Recorrió la acera en busca de algo que le resultara familiar, pero no encontró nada; ni siquiera su paraguas rojo de gran tamaño.

Los pensamientos de Malcolm oscilaban mientras movía la cabeza de un lado a otro, repitiendo: "¡Yo no maté a esa mujer! "Estoy solo. No la conozco ni sé lo que pasó "".

"¿No recuerdas o no quieres recordar? Entonces le concederé el privilegio de explicárselo al magistrado".

La boca de Shanahan se torció en una mueca de desprecio mientras observaba con repugnancia al desaliñado joven despertarse de su sueño como si estuviera sumido en el estupor. Su pelo enmarañado, su aliento horrible y sus ojos inyectados en sangre hablaban de una noche de juerga. Pero, ¿a costa de quién?

Sus ojos se dirigieron hacia la mujer que yacía muerta a su lado.

Con la mano visiblemente temblorosa, Shanahan agarró su silbato y sopló con fuerza, alertando a su compañero. Por un momento se olvidó de que su compañero estaba asegurándose el desayuno en la panadería local.

A los pocos minutos llegó el agente Granthom.

"Este es Malcolm Hedwig. Acaba de cometer el brutal asesinato de esa joven. Y finge no conocerla ni saber dónde está. Típico criminal, convertido en asesino. Llama a esto por la mujer. Vamos a escoltarlo a la comisaría".

Esposado y confuso, Malcolm entró lentamente en la comisaría. Una comisaría llamaban a este lugar, pensó. ¿Qué tipo de justicia recibiré en esta sala tan retrasada?

Tropezó, pero no antes de que los dos agentes lo sostuvieran en pie. Las paredes blancas y destartaladas desaparecieron, transformándose tan rápidamente que la cabeza le dio vueltas. En su lugar se materializó un pasillo interminable de bronce. En los oídos de Malcolm retumbaban sutiles pero enérgicos golpes en las paredes interiores, como almas enloquecidas que suplicaban ser rescatadas de su cautiverio.

Como una escena de su novela favorita, el pasillo se dobló hacia dentro. Al instante, las manos de los agentes soltaron los brazos de Malcolm. Las esposas cayeron de sus muñecas.

Malcolm se desvaneció en la luz mortecina del final del pasillo. Sus últimos pensamientos se centraron en si estaba a punto de deslizarse hacia el infinito, luego se centraron en el paradero de su nuevo paraguas y en si alguna vez podría volver a su mundano trabajo de contable.

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Para mi tema, me inspiré y utilicé la publicación de @daily.prompt de:

Neverending hallway:
4 February 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2272

Slip into infinity:
10 February 2024, @mariannewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 2278

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Great story. I really like the narrative transition from one character to another, as well as what I perceive as a time jump. Your story is very creative. Greetings and happy week @justclickindiva

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Hello @sirenahippie. Hope you have been doing good. Thanks so much for taking the time to visit and view my short story. I appreciate it and your lovely compliment. I was hoping the transition to Malcolm's point of view went smoothly. I also appreciate your support and that of @sagarkothari88. It's truly heartfelt.

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Is it a crime story? Is it a mystery? Or is it a sci-fi?
I don't know the answer, but I like it! It sounds like a perfect chapter in a "Twin Peaks"-like book or movie... 🙂


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Wow, Twin Peaks! How lovely. Thanks so much for visiting and viewing my short story. I appreciate it and your support. I wonder where Malcolm's red umbrella disappeared to?

Hopefully, he finds answers to his predicament. Take care.

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Oh, that twist at the end adds to the gripping mystery and suspense in this story! Did Malcolm phase into an alternate never-ending hallway or he's hallucinating following his denials and confusion at seeing the dead woman's body? This is a fascinating story that makes me want to know how Officers Shanahan and Granthom's day ended. I hope they got their killer. Malcolm seems innocent or is he? 😄 Well done. Take care and have a great day.
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Malcolm's day is not over yet, @kemmyb. So many questions he needs to answer that I don't think he knows yet. The only thing he does know is that his red umbrella is missing.

Thanks for your visit and curious insight into Malcolm's dilemma. Take care.

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I wonder where his red umbrella disappeared to. I'll be looking forward to the continuing part of this intriguing story. 😁

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Wow♥️, this is so interesting, especially the narrative transposition.
Waiting to continue the story.
Thank you for sharing.

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Hello @pricelessudy. I'm pleased you found my short story interesting. I appreciate you stopping by and reading it. Thanks so much for the lovely compliment. Take care.

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